It's a lovely poem. Thank you for sharing it.
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A poem for a hurting friend (mom beware of reading this....ie, Mike stuff)
By jokassis1Jan 07, 09 01:19 AM

I'm Free
Don't Grieve for me, For now I'm free.
I'm following the path god laid for me.
I took God's hand when I heard the call;
I turned my back and left it all.
I could not stay another day
To laugh, to love, to work or play.
I found that place at the close of day.
If parting has left a void,
Then fill it with remembered joy.
A friendship shared, a laugh, a kiss.
Ah yes, these things, I too, will miss.
Be not burdened with times of sorrow
I wish you the sunshine of tomorrow
My life's been full, I savored much.
Good friends, good times, a loves one's touch.
Perhaps my time seemed all too brief;
don't lengthen it now with undue grief.
Lift up your heart and share with me.
God wanted me now, he set me free.


COMMENTS
Simply beautiful. It has been over 26 years since I lost my Dad. He was a mere 57 years old. He literally gave his life for the things he loved, his family. He was a gentle man. He was a giant of a man. He was my best friend. He was so, so, proud of me. He was an immigrant who came from Denmark at the age of 2. I will never be able to fill the shoes he walked it. Thank you for unlocking some of the fondest memories that I shall ever have. We may outwardly grieve, inwardly we love.
even thow you screwed it up still brings tears to my eyes and a heavy heart...................thank you i needed to read that again ..................love mom aka helenpoker
II lost my little brother 5 years ago when he was 17. I have been speaking to this woman online on one of the forums I use for work for about 2 years. When her son Jacob, 17 was killed 2 days before Thanksgiving I was personally touched and felt her pain. It also was the holidays and it is still hard for me and my mom too so it gave me some hope to help someone going thru the same pain. I posted a poem from the only card my family got that meant anything to us. I posted it up for her and I wante




NicknVegas
as long as u think of them at times just like they were with u now, they will always be with u and when ur times come u will be with them forever. The loss of both of my fathers, natural and the one that raised me is on my mind all the time and I rely on them to be the best person I can be and to help others when I can, things that they did all their lives.